Sunday, January 13, 2013

Eternal peace, a reality which is still due

Can we have peace, an eternal one?
No War, No bullets, No bombing of cities,
A free world, which smells of love and tranquillity,
Blurred borders and no questions asked.
It all may just be a dream in real world,
But I am happy it’s a dream that I wish to come true,
Wish is what matters for now, a reality which is still due.

- VJ Says ~ Cheers and Peace


  1. Tha last line hangs on hope and hope makes world spin...

    Nice lines.

    1. Thanks Meenakshi... Yeah true Hope makes world spin :)

  2. We all wish the same - for the bloodshed and the hatred and the pain to end. And we hope to live to witness the day when no innocent life will be lost for an unknown cause.

    In the fourth line, I think you meant "borders" and not "boarders". :)

    Well penned. Keep it up.

    1. Hey glad you liked it... Thanks for pointing out the err in the 4th line, glad you read it right :)


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