Sunday, February 5, 2012

The Untitled Lady And The Dreamer In Me!

Photo Credit: Image: vorakorn kanokpipat / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

She kept walking aimlessly on the beach,
Leaving behind footprints of her naked feet,
With every wave that swept to the shore,
Old prints kept being erased,
But she kept walking making new ones.

I was sitting on the rocks bewitched by her,
Was it her innocence or was it her smile,
Was it the aura, was it her energy unseen,
What was it that made me feel mesmerized?
She was an enigmatic persona personified.

She looked up at the sky,
Searching for the shiny face of the sun.
She smiled when she spotted it glowing at her,
She shielded her face with her silky palm.

She turned around and called out for me,
Gesturing with her hands waving in air,
She was asking me to join her by the sea.
I got up from where I sat and ran towards her.

When I got to where she was, she was gone,
She vanished like evaporated thoughts.
And I stood stranded yet smiling by the sea.

Strange are the ways these pictures make me feel,
Hanging on my hall, all neatly nailed and framed.
I look at them yet again,
Trying to connect with the souls entrapped .

It’s the one in the centre, with a lady by the sea,
I am trying to shake myself out of the dream.
She looks like an angel, 
May be in a place that I have never been,
She might be someone else’s love,
And to me she is just another dream.

VJ Says ~ Cheers & Peace!

40 comments:

  1. For all you know, the footprints in the picture could belong to a guy, may be to the photographer who walked backwards to click that picture? :)

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  2. @sunil deepak: LOL :D May be... May be not... The photographer who walked backwards... could be a lady too... ;)
    Cheers! Thanks for visiting the blog...

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  3. You dream beautifully, young man. :)

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  4. This was really beautiful! I wish it turns into a reality someday :)

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  5. All i can say is its just beautiful.. I loved the 4th para too much.. Keep Writing:)

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  6. The sea by itself is enigmatic and then you have brought about a lady. Must read Robert Browning's Cristina. I have spent more than half my life at sea and I instantly connect to anything to do with the sea

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  7. SO beautifully written! :)

    One word-WOW! :)I loved the smooth transition of words.Sounded so natural and soothing!! :)

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  8. Beautifully jotted down, loved going through it ...

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  9. it reminded me of the song 'u r beautiful' by James blunt!
    very nicely penned :)


    sarah

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  10. and may your dreams come true...see by the sea..you might find your lady

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  11. Beautiful! Wish all your dreams come true!

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  12. Hope ur dream to be came true... Nicely written.

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  13. Strangely, reading your post made me wonder whether you're a piscean... chckd ur profile.. n Voila! U are!

    Beautifully written by the way, words very well played with... Cheers!

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  14. ...no tedious thought and no ponderous words...a beautiful creation...so simple and elegant!
    Cheers Vijay!!

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  15. @D.Nambiar: Thank you young lady :-)

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  16. @Arti : Thanks Arti... Yeah it may turn into reality... or it May not... nevertheless the dream will always stay green in my memory!

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  17. @My Never Ending Thoughts... : Thanks... Glad to know you liked it... Thanks for the encouragement...sure will keep writing.. that’s what keeps me happy ;-)

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  18. @My Never Ending Thoughts... : Thanks... Glad to know you liked it... Thanks for the encouragement...sure will keep writing.. that’s what keeps me happy ;-)

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  19. @Dee........ : Hey Glad u liked it Dee... the snap was my muse...

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  20. @sunbyanyname: Its fantastic to know about your relationship with the sea... Couldn’t agree more.. Sea is always enigmatic.. Thanks for referring “Cristina by Robert Browning” I read it... It was beautiful :-)

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  21. @Jen..The Butterfly Effect : Thank you Jen... Glad to know that you loved reading it... It always helps when you get to hear kind words...

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  22. @Aakash Kokz : Hey Aakash thanks for visiting my blog and reading my post... I appreciate it... cheers!

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  23. @Aakash Kokz : Hey Aakash thanks for visiting my blog and reading my post... I appreciate it... cheers!

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  24. @subtlescribbler : Hey glad to know you enjoyed reading it... Thanks!

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  25. @sush : Hey thanks for the wishes... Yeah I might just find the lady by the sea :-)

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  26. @Arnab Maity: Thanks Arnab.. Glad you found it to be beautiful...

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  27. @Pranita : He He He... Well... So you figured out the Piscean connection! Glad to know you liked it Pranita... Thanks for the kind words.. Cheers!

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  28. @Pranita : He He He... Well... So you figured out the Piscean connection! Glad to know you liked it Pranita... Thanks for the kind words.. Cheers!

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  29. @AmitAag : Thanks! Well just few simple words from a man with simple thoughts sir... Cheers!

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  30. woow...very well written...for a moment i thought i was in a dream while reading this poem...

    hey subscribing to your blogs and will follow from now on!!!

    regards
    rahul

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  31. the mystic woman who comes from or goes back in the sea, the unlimited, untamed, infinite ! Very Well written....

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    deep from my heart

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  33. Superb poem and nothing can be more soothing place than sea-shore.

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  35. Amazingly written man..loved it!

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  36. dream on!
    there's so much a picture can tell!

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  37. lovely expression! nice dream ur words took me to ur vision :) well said ...keep writing & smiling :) with ur dream :)

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