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Deserted I stood, in her
absence.
Uncertain and unsure I
was,
Will she ever return?
The heart ached, in her
want.
Will she ever be back in
my life?
The question stared into
my eyes.
It was never expected,
It all happened so
sudden.
Wish you had stepped
back,
Wished you had reasoned
it all.
Life could have been
different,
I speak to self and
console my soul.
I still stand on the
path of departure,
Looking out for signs of
your return.
The heart believes you
have not gone away,
You are still around the
woods we met,
Just hiding round the
corner looking at me.
I sense your feeble foot
sounds,
I am still here waiting
for you,
Waiting for you to turn
around.
- VJ Says Cheers and Peace
Very nice composition, VJ:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Meenakshi... cheers!
ReplyDeleteSuch an honest expression Vijay, hope not yours. The line where you have written about stood where you met in woods is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru... Delighted to hear such words from a seasoned blogger like you... can't deny that the words of this poem are influenced by my own life.
DeleteThe anguish wafts across those lines. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You umashankar. Appreciate you visiting my blog.
DeleteNicely written. . can feel the pain in lines. .
ReplyDeleteThanks... Glad you could sense the essence.. cheers!
DeleteI kept seeing myself, my anguish in the poem.
ReplyDeleteSo straight forward, and a soulful composition.
Thanks Anshul... Glad you could connect with my thoughts and writing... Cheers!
DeleteLove makes us all so vulnerable! very touching.
ReplyDelete-Portia
True Portia... it makes us vulnerable indeed... Thanks... Glad you liked it :)
DeleteHeartfelt. Really heartbroken?
ReplyDeleteThanks... Well can't deny moments of my life do reflect in my words of this poem :)
DeleteOh, why this after that 'girl with a sparkling soul'? I hope you are not actually heart-broken. I wish to see all young people successful in their love.
ReplyDelete-PoetDesh
Well life and love are both unpredictable... the blows and lows are inevitable at times... cheers glad you shared your thoughts...
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