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Free Thoughts Of A Dark Desire !!

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They told me not to venture into the darkness,
They said that’s where the evils stay.
But I walked into the darkness,
And I did see them play.


Darkness has its own beauty,
But seldom does the world agree.
They termed it to be an evil thought,
Tarnished everyone who believed such a thought.
          

Many a free thoughts remain untold,
You feel banished, lonely and cold,
Silently everyone desires the forbidden,
And they term the truthful, the unforgiven.

- VJ Says ~ Cheers & Peace!

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  1. Beautiful... You have a way with ur words, that makes reading a pleasure!

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    1. Thanks Pranita... Happy that you enjoyed reading it...

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  2. Hey Vijay!...how you navigate with 'your' words through words as if you were not steering but floating! Oh boy!
    Cheers!

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  3. darkness has a story itself that most of them fear to unfold. but if we stroll through the forlorn land in quest of exploring the forbidden, we might discover beauty hidden in dark silence.

    loved your poetry:)

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    1. Thank you Fantasy.. Your comments beautifully reflected your thoughts

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  4. your words are picturesque; a flowing narrative that I appreciate. Thank you for conveying your thoughts and may you continue to be inspired to write.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words. Appreciate you stopping by to read my blog.

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  5. Very Nice Vijay!!! Darkrness is not bad as we thinks there are a lot of beautiful things which are hidden in the darkness....Really Nice Peice of poem....

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  6. beautiful lines..
    loved it...

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    1. Thanks Porita..... appreciate you visiting my blog

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  8. Very thought provoking---we all live in two worlds-
    One is for us to rue,
    And the other is for the world to view.

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    1. Thank you Indu for the lovely comment

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  9. Darkness does have its own beauty. I agree.

    Very nicely written.

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    1. Glad you agree with my thought... Thank You

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  10. oooooooo this was too good....i was rapping in my mind reading it..lovely powerful wrds

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  11. I agree darkness has its own beauty. Nice read...

    Love
    Mani

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    1. Thanks Mani.. Thank you for visiting my blog. Yeah darkness is beautiful indeed

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    1. Thank you Janaki.. appreciate you visiting my blog

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  13. Lovely dark lines, the world sees only what it wants to and feels safe in.

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    1. Thank you Sulekha... The world is world is full of hypocrites... Never mind them

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