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How long are
you going to stay entrapped?
Stay cocooned
within four walls of your mind.
Why stand
hiding behind your own shadow,
No place for
shame, No place for regret, let it go!
What is that
you are holding back in your psyche?
These are just thoughts,
Let them fly free and
high.
Why heed to
the cynics,
Why fret
about what they think,
Why keep it
all bottled up and let your soul stink.
What you seek
you will surely find,
Just don’t
give up, not just yet,
Walk ahead,
walk just a few more miles,
Walk the path
with head held high and a smile.
The gloom
within is what you created,
It’s time now
to shrug it off your mind.
It’s not as
hard as you envisage,
It’s all just
a state of mind.
lovely inspirational poem
ReplyDeleteWhat you seek you will surely find,
Just don’t give up, not just yet,
Walk ahead, walk just a few more miles,
Walk the path with head held high and a smile.
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You wished for a great life..
ReplyDeleteBut what you created within is just gloom..
Why this melancholy, why this strife..
When it is also within YOU to bloom!
Lovvvvvd the poem! It kinda poetizes my most recent post... Cheers!
Well done...enjoyed your write
ReplyDeleteFantastic Poem....thanks a lot for the inspiring words :)
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Wow. So inspiring and uplifting. In your simple and frank style, you have conveyed the message pretty well. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteNice one! :D Love the layout :)
ReplyDeleteLove the poem! I could sing a song of this!
ReplyDeleteThese are thoughts
Let them fly high
I loved those most! I think we all ought to bring our thoughts to fruition! :)
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Lovely :) Just brilliant :)
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ReplyDelete@Chirag Joshi: Thank you Chirag, Glad you found it to be inspirational. Did visit your blog – fantastic Hindi poetry and stories... cheers!
ReplyDelete@Pranita:
ReplyDeleteThanks for those lovely four lines added by you. Glad that you loved it! Cheers!
@Shamsud:
ReplyDeleteThank you... Garcias
@Pram:
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@Enigmatic Soul:
ReplyDeleteHappy to know that I could stir some emotions with my words. Thank you for the kind words!
@Harshini:
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@Jen..The Butterfly Effect :
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@~iyshu~:
ReplyDeleteThank you... I’m flattered and humbled by your words.
@wake up call:
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