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Lady with enchanting smile & a story untold !

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There is a magic in your smile,
There is a story in your eyes,
May be someday darling,
You will let me be a part of your life.

Concealed within you are your emotions,
Emotions of joy and kindness,
You share it all with no reticence,
Spreading happiness everywhere you go.

At times your eyes speak of the less spoken,
I can see what you try hard to mask.
You too carry a burden,
A burden of pain, unspoken.

Let me in, Let me share,
For my heart does care.
Let me help you clear the haze,
For you deserve to stay happy always.

~ VJ says Cheers & Peace !
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Location: Vittal Mallya Rd, SR Nagar, Bengaluru, Karnataka, India

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  1. deepsFebruary 2, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    very well written!!

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  2. Vijay ShenoyFebruary 19, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    @deeps: Thank you... appreciate that you visited the post and liked it too :-)

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  3. Saru SinghalFebruary 19, 2012 at 8:45 PM

    I loved the first and the last paragraph. Good to see another poetry blogger. Keep writing...:)

    Also, love this phrase:
    "Burden of pain"

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  4. Vijay ShenoyFebruary 19, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    @Saru Singhal
    Thank you for the kind words... Essence of poetry is inexplicable... Glad you like them..

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  5. anatreekFebruary 19, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    Both your poems and posts are too good!:)

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  6. DellaFebruary 19, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    lovely words! it gives a warm feeling of being cared. :)

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  7. Vijay ShenoyFebruary 20, 2012 at 1:05 AM

    @Ana_treek :
    Hey Thank you so much... glad to know you liked them... cheers.. take care..

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  8. Vijay ShenoyFebruary 20, 2012 at 1:07 AM

    @della :
    Thanks... much appreciate the fact that you enjoyed it when you read it ... Feels good when someone reads the feelings behind the words

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  9. MalinyFebruary 20, 2012 at 8:13 AM

    nice choice of words . . glad i found another poetry blogger out here . . keep posting :)

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  10. CYNOSUREFebruary 20, 2012 at 1:13 PM

    seriously I'm short of words...I loved it...awesome work...keep scribbling... :)

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  11. ArnieFebruary 20, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    Beautiful Poetry! Does this have any connection to reality Vijay?? :P If yes, she should be impressed by this time :)

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  12. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 20, 2012 at 3:25 PM

    AWW.Gorgeous lines I fell for...

    There is magic in your smile
    There is a story in your eyes.

    Keep up the awesome work buddy!! :)

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  13. raFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    wow wow wow...

    too good and so meaningful !

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  14. KajalFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:05 PM

    So beautiful.. loved it. I love these straight from the heart poems/ posts.

    your newest follower and a regular visitor now:)

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  15. AmitAagFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    Very nice Vijay dear...keep it up!!
    ...amit:)

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  16. Mr.MiglaniFebruary 21, 2012 at 3:46 PM

    Nice

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2012 at 4:45 PM

    Good one

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    Very nice Vijay. The poetry brings out the innocence and the honest appreciation which most of us long for. I loved the sweet innocence it talks about, the eyes, the smile- they add a lot of beauty to the poem.

    Good going mate :)

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 10, 2012 at 4:35 PM

      Hey yeah few moments bring out such emotions... Cheers..

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  19. fantasy in practicalityMarch 8, 2012 at 5:03 PM

    lucky lady, wonderful poem that describes her smile as well as sorrows.

    very well written Vijay:)

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