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Scattered Beads, Timeless Emotions!

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Light peeked in through the cracks,
The cracks on my withered wooden door.
I saw a familiar shadow walking past,
I sensed someone walking on the silent floor. 



I walked up to the door to open it,
I felt desperate to silence my illusion.
I found beads you wore on your anklets 
Scattered all over the splintered floor.


I bent down and gathered them,
Placed them one by one safely in my palm.
Silver tear drops wet them silently,
As I clasped them closer to my heart.


The music has stopped long back,
Your dancing feet have disappeared.
Separated by time we live different lives,
But love still stays alive deep within the heart.


- VJ Says ~ Cheers and Peace !

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  1. PranitaApril 20, 2012 at 10:45 AM

    Beautiful... i could imagine the happenings..!

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  2. Preeti S.April 20, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    Wonderful, vivid and emotionally charged. Well penned.

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  3. indu chhibberApril 20, 2012 at 11:49 AM

    you paint a v.vivid picture.

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  4. indu chhibberApril 20, 2012 at 10:07 PM

    I am back-this time with a surprise for you..pl. visit this link http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2012/04/wow-this-is-truly-awesome.html

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  5. Sri ValliApril 20, 2012 at 11:09 PM

    Very touching and beautiful poem...I loved the last two lines a lot!

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  6. JANUApril 21, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    Very nice Vijay.

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  7. A Homemaker's UtopiaApril 21, 2012 at 7:09 PM

    Beautiful lines..:-)

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  8. magiceyeApril 21, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    this is lovely!!

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  9. Anshul GautamApril 21, 2012 at 10:36 PM

    I loved the feelings painted over words that expressed the longings and touched me deep. :)

    -ANSHUL
    http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.in/2012/04/vividity.html

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  10. VajraApril 22, 2012 at 6:48 AM

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  11. VajraApril 22, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    My mind will be like rocket science If I do ready any poetic language..But after reading these wonderful lines..I think I'm changed little bit now(Not bad ..I can get the lines easily..lol).All in all virtual thoughts in real world.Superb bro

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  12. MakApril 22, 2012 at 11:50 PM

    'seperated by time we live different lives' wow VJ...very nice expression of emotions. loved it

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  13. D.NambiarApril 23, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    Beautiful lines, as always.

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