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What am I searching for in the dark sky?
Stars are not twinkling tonight,
The Moon too seems to be in hiding,
Yet there is a feeling of delight,
I let myself flow with the moment,
Stop my urge to rationalize the feeling.
Engrossed in the feeling of joy and ecstasy,
I keep drifting away into the darkness.
Thoughts bloom one after other,
Stringed together they form a dream.
Mind senses strange sense of tranquility,
This moment of trance is a sign of peace.
-VJ Says ~ Cheers and Peace!
I couldn't resist asking this, amavasye rathri na? :D
ReplyDeleteHe He He.... Onthara hage ittu avattu ;-)
DeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful imagery I find here in this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn...
Thank You Andy
DeleteGood imagination and creativity!
ReplyDeleteThank You Shilpi...
DeleteDid i tell you before,you have a beautiful blog,& your imagery matches it--no surpasses it .
ReplyDeleteThanks Indu... appreciate your kind words.. glad u liked it
DeleteCool...tranquil...peaceful and really beautiful! Cheers Vijay!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit... Cheers!
Deletenice poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Chirag
DeleteThere's something about a dark still night, the quietness, stillness.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem and blog
Deb
http://www.scatteredmusings.net
Thanks Deb... I checked your blog It's lovely too...
DeleteSimple and sweet
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Thank you Jeryl
DeleteNice one VJ, I liked d line- This moment f trance is a sign of peace.
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Mani
Thanks Mani Glad u liked it
Deletei am sucked in by the charming silence....lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sudha... Those words were encouraging .. cheers
DeleteBeautiful lines there! I could imagine myself going through those emotions on that night as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kirti... hope you enjoyed the journey
DeleteGreat title!! :) And mesmerizing lines indeed Vinay!!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jen... Cheers
DeleteOOps *Vijay! :)
ReplyDeleteGr8 work, keep it up..
ReplyDeleteThanks BOB
DeleteBeautifully penned :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Harshini
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