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Free Thoughts Of A Dark Desire !!

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They told me not to venture into the darkness,
They said that’s where the evils stay.
But I walked into the darkness,
And I did see them play.


Darkness has its own beauty,
But seldom does the world agree.
They termed it to be an evil thought,
Tarnished everyone who believed such a thought.
          

Many a free thoughts remain untold,
You feel banished, lonely and cold,
Silently everyone desires the forbidden,
And they term the truthful, the unforgiven.

- VJ Says ~ Cheers & Peace!
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  1. PranitaMarch 23, 2012 at 1:24 AM

    Beautiful... You have a way with ur words, that makes reading a pleasure!

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 6:29 PM

      Thanks Pranita... Happy that you enjoyed reading it...

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  2. AmitAagMarch 23, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Hey Vijay!...how you navigate with 'your' words through words as if you were not steering but floating! Oh boy!
    Cheers!

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  3. fantasy in practicalityMarch 23, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    darkness has a story itself that most of them fear to unfold. but if we stroll through the forlorn land in quest of exploring the forbidden, we might discover beauty hidden in dark silence.

    loved your poetry:)

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 6:31 PM

      Thank you Fantasy.. Your comments beautifully reflected your thoughts

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  4. The Roaming PhotographerMarch 23, 2012 at 2:15 PM

    your words are picturesque; a flowing narrative that I appreciate. Thank you for conveying your thoughts and may you continue to be inspired to write.

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 7:20 PM

      Thank you for the kind words. Appreciate you stopping by to read my blog.

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  5. RathoreMarch 23, 2012 at 3:00 PM

    Very Nice Vijay!!! Darkrness is not bad as we thinks there are a lot of beautiful things which are hidden in the darkness....Really Nice Peice of poem....

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  6. bobMarch 23, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    beautiful lines..
    loved it...

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  7. AnonymousMarch 23, 2012 at 7:32 PM

    nice rhythm.
    -Portia

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 6:47 PM

      Thanks Porita..... appreciate you visiting my blog

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  8. indu chhibberMarch 23, 2012 at 8:49 PM

    Very thought provoking---we all live in two worlds-
    One is for us to rue,
    And the other is for the world to view.

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  9. D.NambiarMarch 24, 2012 at 5:57 AM

    Darkness does have its own beauty. I agree.

    Very nicely written.

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  10. A Homemaker's UtopiaMarch 24, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    Beautiful poem...Loved it..:-)

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  11. UnknownMarch 24, 2012 at 10:40 AM

    oooooooo this was too good....i was rapping in my mind reading it..lovely powerful wrds

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  12. Manisha BhatiaMarch 24, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    I agree darkness has its own beauty. Nice read...

    Love
    Mani

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 6:33 PM

      Thanks Mani.. Thank you for visiting my blog. Yeah darkness is beautiful indeed

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  13. JANUMarch 24, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    Beautiful.

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 6:32 PM

      Thank you Janaki.. appreciate you visiting my blog

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  14. sulekkhaMarch 26, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    Lovely dark lines, the world sees only what it wants to and feels safe in.

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    1. Vijay ShenoyMarch 27, 2012 at 5:49 PM

      Thank you Sulekha... The world is world is full of hypocrites... Never mind them

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  15. Elvira Lobo(Elli)March 28, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    so thoughtful....

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