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I have never
met her,
Never certain
if I ever will,
But strange
are the ways, how people meet,
Sometimes I
wonder, what it all means.
It was a
silly chat in this wired world,
I saw her in
the virtual world,
Never certain
if she really existed in reality,
Words stringed
together lead to a conversation.
Like a breeze
of wind she came into my life,
She was calm,
intriguing and sweet.
It was
magical as long as it lasted,
Then one
fine day she was gone with the wind.
Then there
came days when I couldn’t find her,
She was not
there when I searched her on my list,
Disappeared
she was, dejected was my heart,
Foolish I
felt for I believed in the unseen.
Such is love
in reality too,
This was
better, least I never knew who she was.
And then one
day I saw someone across the road,
She was her,
the face I saw on her profile.
My heart
skipped few beats,
I wanted to
reach out, scream out loud,
It was her
and I was sure of that,
I ran across
the street with vigour unknown,
My heart
pounding as if it would explode.
I got to the
coffee table where she sat,
There was so
much to say,
But I could
manage nothing but “hi!”
She looked up
to see who it was,
Her twinkling
eyes said she was happy,
But no words
spoken to express them.
I thought I
had got it all wrong,
May be she
never existed,
As I walked
away in silence,
I consoled
myself saying,
May be it was
yet another joke,
Silly me for
believing in fantasies.
Then I felt a
warm hand on my shoulder,
As I stood in
silence to turn back,
It was her again,
the virtual girl.
She said sorry
but I guess I know you.
You are him,
the one I once knew.
I smiled and so
did she,
No words were
spoken,
Yet the
silence said it all,
She was for
real, so were the feelings,
We walked
down the street hand in hand,
Stealing glances,
absorbed in the moment,
We realised
we were meant to be together.
- VJ says ~ Cheers and Peace!
This sounds like a Bollywood Masala story...the start was very real but later turned to be a oh i know this ending types ;)still.....as a writer u r attemptng all types...but still cannot rate this piece as high as the others...
ReplyDelete@Archana Sirish: Thank you for your honest comments. Appreciate it :)
ReplyDeleteVery dramatic and contemporary, VJ. While it is simple and perhaps even predictable, the way you have written it makes it very readable. Keep shining.
ReplyDeleteyou sure are a dreamer :-)
ReplyDeleteyour poetry are unique and interesting.
Very nice....Perfect poem for a movie as one of ur friends has mentioned! :)
ReplyDeleteSplendid writing...!
ReplyDeleteAwesome as always :)
ReplyDeleteU ROCK.. "NO WORDS WERE SPOKEN"
--Dee...
Simple and Beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, those intense emotions of first love - the excitement, the expectations and (hopefully none) cruel rejection. You spun a beautiful tale of love. A bit predictable, a bit clichéd but I loved it. Keep it up. :)
ReplyDeleteI love it, last paragraph is playing in my mind...:)
ReplyDeletei could visualize the same while reading this poem .. loved it
ReplyDeleteI love the virtual world love stories :)!!
ReplyDeleteThey give a bit of a complex to traditional love stories don't you think?!:) I'm talking about really genuine web love stories. I was so mesmerized watching You've Got Mail today morning and this poem just got me dreaming even more:)!!
Your poetry takes me into the imaginary world. Someday, somewhere someone goes through this n its nice to re-live it in your poems... it used to be a lot of pain earlier in ur poems, now, though dramatic, brings a smile on d face :)
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