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There
is a magic in your smile,
There
is a story in your eyes,
May be
someday darling,
You
will let me be a part of your life.
Concealed
within you are your emotions,
Emotions
of joy and kindness,
You
share it all with no reticence,
Spreading
happiness everywhere you go.
At
times your eyes speak of the less spoken,
I can see
what you try hard to mask.
You
too carry a burden,
A
burden of pain, unspoken.
Let me
in, Let me share,
For my
heart does care.
Let me
help you clear the haze,
For
you deserve to stay happy always.
~ VJ says Cheers & Peace !
very well written!!
ReplyDelete@deeps: Thank you... appreciate that you visited the post and liked it too :-)
ReplyDeleteI loved the first and the last paragraph. Good to see another poetry blogger. Keep writing...:)
ReplyDeleteAlso, love this phrase:
"Burden of pain"
@Saru Singhal
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words... Essence of poetry is inexplicable... Glad you like them..
Both your poems and posts are too good!:)
ReplyDeletelovely words! it gives a warm feeling of being cared. :)
ReplyDelete@Ana_treek :
ReplyDeleteHey Thank you so much... glad to know you liked them... cheers.. take care..
@della :
ReplyDeleteThanks... much appreciate the fact that you enjoyed it when you read it ... Feels good when someone reads the feelings behind the words
nice choice of words . . glad i found another poetry blogger out here . . keep posting :)
ReplyDeleteseriously I'm short of words...I loved it...awesome work...keep scribbling... :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Poetry! Does this have any connection to reality Vijay?? :P If yes, she should be impressed by this time :)
ReplyDeleteAWW.Gorgeous lines I fell for...
ReplyDeleteThere is magic in your smile
There is a story in your eyes.
Keep up the awesome work buddy!! :)
wow wow wow...
ReplyDeletetoo good and so meaningful !
So beautiful.. loved it. I love these straight from the heart poems/ posts.
ReplyDeleteyour newest follower and a regular visitor now:)
Very nice Vijay dear...keep it up!!
ReplyDelete...amit:)
Nice
ReplyDeleteGood one
ReplyDeleteVery nice Vijay. The poetry brings out the innocence and the honest appreciation which most of us long for. I loved the sweet innocence it talks about, the eyes, the smile- they add a lot of beauty to the poem.
ReplyDeleteGood going mate :)
Hey yeah few moments bring out such emotions... Cheers..
Deletelucky lady, wonderful poem that describes her smile as well as sorrows.
ReplyDeletevery well written Vijay:)
Thank You Fantasy
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