I sat there
in silence,
With my head
resting on her lap.
She was warm
and gentle,
It felt
soothing and blissful.
As she
caressed me and kissed me,
It felt
lovely with her by my side.
As a gentle
breeze blew,
I felt her
hairs gently slapping my face.
I looked at
her beautiful face and smiled,
I slowly
whispered into her ears,
“I have
missed you all these years.”
She replied
with a twinkle in her eyes,
“I’m glad you
said it,
I’m happy
that you are here.”
I closed my
eyes to sink in the moment,
I felt my
cheeks getting wet,
I opened my
eyes and looked at her,
Her eyes were
filled with tears.
I sensed she
was in pain,
She had
something troubling her mind,
I asked her
holding her hands,
What was she
trying to hide?
Then she told
me her story,
A story of
silent pain,
She had been
enduring all her life.
She was
epitome of kindness and love,
She showered
people with gifts of joy,
Nursed and
comforted them in her shade.
When people
came to her with sorrow,
She let them
romance her with her beauty.
She let them
pluck her flowers as memoires.
She was
sacrificial in her love,
All that she
ever asked for in return,
Was for a
little love and care,
She was
always happy to be of use,
Both in her
life and her death.
She was first
praised for her beauty,
And then
violated every day.
And then they
began to treat her like nobody,
Insulting and
bleeding her with sharp chops.
First they
asked for a part of her,
She gladly
gave it away.
Then they
kept coming back for more,
Until they
had relished the whole of her.
I sat next to
her in silence,
I kept
thinking aloud in shame,
How could we
have done this to her?
How could we
all be so ruthless?
I stood up to
leave, but she held my hand,
I turned
around, hugged her tight with teary eyes,
With a
twinkle in eyes she asked,
“Will you not
kiss your darling good bye?”
I kissed her
one last time as I walked away,
She stood
there watching me leave,
Swaying with
the wind and wishing me good bye.
P.S: I’m
sorry if this was a tad too lengthy, but I guess it still falls short to explain how
I feel about the happenings around us. A beauty called nature being
destroyed everyday by us. I guess at least now we take that one critical step
in restoring what we have been destroying.
“Save trees,
Save nature, Secure a better future!”
Think of her
as your love, She will love you back ten folds!
As usual my
parting words.... VJ says ~ Cheers and Peace!
Hi Vijay,
ReplyDeleteI think this piece of your work is completely enchanting.I loved the usage of words and the emotions you have woven around it.
I read a couple of your blogs but this was the best!
Keep up the good work and share the links with me!Good things need to be spread ;)
Cheers!
Archana
@Archana: Thank you. Glad to know u liked what I wrote. Sure will keep you updated on the latest of my work being churned out in my brain factory.... Thank you again.
ReplyDeleteof all, i like your post script very much, doesn't mean that i dint like the poem, it was marvelous read :)
ReplyDeletehappy blogging
DEEPAK
your poems are really really amazing....
ReplyDeletethe imagination and the way you express is brilliant...
awesome sir... keep writing.. :)
@Deepak: Appreciate your comments, Thank you. Glad to know you liked my poem. Cheers Keep visiting my blog for more :)
ReplyDelete@jaynthbusi: Thank you. Glad to know you liked it buddy! And hey thanks for the encouragement. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteTruly moving lines. Our planet needs more thinkers like you. Do keep writing, since you have a way with words, and are able to express yourself in a genuine and unique manner. The greatest task for a poet is to find his or her own unique voice and language. Wish you all the best. Happy Sankranti!
ReplyDeleteLoved the concept.
ReplyDelete@subhorup dasgupta : Thank you for stopping by and spending some time reading my blog. Yeah I guess little contribution by all of us may be even with an attempt to voice our thoughts would be helpful.I did read your blog, good one indeed. Hey thanks for the festive wishes. Wish you HAPPY SANKRANTI too.
ReplyDelete@Somya Singh: Thank you for your kind words. Cheers Take Care!
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ReplyDeleteDid i say u have a beautiful flow of emotions in your work??? ;)
ReplyDeleteYes, you should try getting better at usage of words. I see the beautiful idea behind ur poem though. Very creative... loved it.
@Pranita: Thanks... Glad you read the emotions so well.. Appreciate your feedback... Sure I can write the same with with better vocabulary.. But at times it helps to keep the language simple... just like the thoughts ;-)
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely piece; so full of emotions.
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