“Coffeeee!!
Teaa!!”
“Coffeeee!! Teaa!!”
The vendor called out as he passed the coupe.
The vendor called out as he passed the coupe.
“Thuddd!”
The baby fell on its knee trying to walk across to his mother.
The mother ran to pick up the child and is busy placating him.
The baby fell on its knee trying to walk across to his mother.
The mother ran to pick up the child and is busy placating him.
Ravishing
young lady sat across him checking her flock of hair in the mirror of her mini
clutch bag.
The chatter
from the group of young boys engrossed in a card game relayed from above.
The train had
halted at Varnasi for 15 mins. He hadn’t moved or uttered a word from the time
he got on.
The newspaper
covered Sanjay’s face; his eyes peered through his bi-focal spectacles and his
hair rested neatly combed sideways.
A pencil in
his hand was losing his grip, he felt drowsy as he struggled to keep his eyes
open.
He heard
someone calling out his name in a distance. He tried to run in the direction of
the feeble voice. As he reached closer, the voice got louder, and the vision
got better. He saw a young boy struggling to stay afloat as he kept drowning in
the lake. Sanjay instantly called out “Ramesh, hang on I will get some help!”
Sanjay started crying out “Help! Help! Help!” but there was no one to hear his
cries. Sanjay didn’t know to swim and was feeling helpless now. Finally he made
a dash to the water and jumped in and tried swimming towards his friend.
Moments later he was gasping for breath and then lost conscious.
He felt
someone smacking water drops on his face. When he opened his eyes, he found
himself lying on the ground with a few people standing around him. A man
sitting next to him spoke to the crowd, “The boy is alright now, he seems to be
gaining conscious.” Sanjay spoke out in a meek voice “Where is Ramesh? Did you
save him too?” Suddenly there was a silence all around. The man who saved
Sanjay’s life finally spoke looking at the dead body of Ramesh lying on the ground
at a short distance, “Sorry we couldn’t save the other boy. He had already
drowned by the time we could save you.” Ramesh let out a loud cry “No!”
Sanjay woke up
from his sleep, crying out “No!” He was sweating profusely, with droplets of
sweat on his forehead dripping down his face. The baby which was wailing in his
mothers arm a little while earlier fell silent. Everyone around including the
group of young boys was now staring at Sanjay. The ravishing young lady who was
sitting across Sanjay, now walked across and sat next to him. Offering a bottle
of water asked “Is everything alright? Are you ok?”
Sanjay now
realised that it was a nightmare that he had seen. It was the same nightmare
which has been haunting him for the last 12 years of his life. It was an event
that changed his life forever. From a happy go lucky bubbly chap who once
played gully cricket in the lanes of Allahabad with his bunch of friends to now
a sober and nerdy faculty at IIM Kolkata. He was hailed as one of the youngest
and brightest faculty members at his college.
The train had
now reached Sasaram, It was scheduled to reach Kolkata at 9:15 PM. It would be
another 6 hours and 35 minutes journey to get to Kolkata. The lady now sitting
next to Sanjay began to introduce herself, “Hi I’m Sangeeta Banerjee from
Kolkata. I run an event management company called Rockstar Promotions. And you
are...?”
Sanjay was
slightly overwhelmed by the outgoing attitude of this lady for he a very simple
life and was too lost in his own world. He had composed himself after gulping
down almost the entire bottle of water offered to him by Sangeeta and began to
speak “Glad to meet you. I’m Sanjay Srivastava, faculty for advance studies in
marketing and advertising at IIM Kolkata.”
Sangeeta had a
look of surprise and joy on her face when she heard Sanjay introducing himself.
She immediately said, “Don’t tell me! You are Sanjay Srivastava, the man who
wrote the book “Strategies and beyond” which had the tag line ‘a route map to
successful business ventures for young entrepreneurs.’ To which in his usual
shy and sober tone Sanjay replied, “Yes I was the one who wrote it.” To which
Sangeetha said, “Your book has been a great inspiration to many youngsters and
helped them turn entrepreneurs.”
For the next
few hours of the journey Sanjay and Sangeeta where engrossed talking to each
other about variety of topics, ranging from her business, to his life as an
writer and a professor, and a peek-a-boo into each other’s personal life as
singleton in the city of joy – Kolkata. They never realised how time went by
until the train came to a halt at Howrah station, its final destination.
Sanjay helped
Sangeeta with her luggage as they both got up to get off the train. Sangeeta gave
her visiting card to Sanjay and they exchanged their mobile numbers. With a
beautiful smile on her face and in her husky voice Sangeeta said, “May be we
should catch up for some coffee sometime, how about this weekend?” Sanjay could
feel his heart skip a beat as he accepted her invitation nodding his head and
saying, “Sounds fantastic to me, I would be glad to meet you again.”
As they parted
ways, Sanjay still stood there watching her disappear into the crowd at the
station. After many a years he felt light at heart, there was a feeling of joy
within which he seemed to have long forgotten. Whistling away with joy he began
to turn around and walk towards the exit. May be this would be the beginning of
a wonderful new journey in his life.
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The End ---------------------------
Two artistic
bloggers I would like to tag for this contest are as below. I would like to apologise
for the short notice but I joined in late myself J
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Note:
This post has been written for Tell a Tale contest posted by Divya. The idea is to complete the story after the first few lines (marked in brown in the story below) has been written by the organizer. Thanks Shweta for tagging me. I have taken the liberty to name the story in line with script and thoughts. I truly enjoyed writing this piece of short story.
VJ Says ~ Cheers and Peace!
Beautiful! U did such a good job with such short time!
ReplyDelete@SR Thank you... Glad you liked it... I enjoyed it thanks to you
DeleteI think you have done a great job within such a short span of time. Amazing!
ReplyDelete@Elvirah: Hey thanks for the kind words... yeah the span was short but the high I got was kinda awesome. Glad you liked it.
DeleteA nice light read. The dream sequence was gripping! Good luck :-)
ReplyDelete@Divya : Kudos to you for ideating and organizing the contest... Thank you for the wishes..
Deletethanks a lot for tagging me. i am excited about the feed back cause this has inspired me to write my first short story.
ReplyDeletei liked your write up. the ending is wonderful with all positive hopes of meeting in rainbow colors.
wish you all the best:)
Hey thanks for your wishes. Glad you liked my write up. I read yours and enjoyed it too.
DeleteCame back to read once more. Cute story :)
ReplyDelete@Bhagyashree: Hey thatz really nice of you to have read my post twice... Glad I was able to reach out to you through my story buddy... Cheers ... Thanks again.
Delete...An unexpected, dramatic end for a good cause! Nice post!
ReplyDelete@AmitAag: Thank you. Appreciate you stopping by my blog and reading my post.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet story, Vijay. Thank you so much for thinking of tagging me. So sorry I couldn't make it. I had a long and not-so-good day yesterday: 3 hours on the dentist's chair, 3 injections, toothache and headache. All of that ...phew!
ReplyDeleteAnyway good job with the story. And good luck
hi Vijay,
ReplyDeletenice attempt.... :)
@D.Nambiar A.K.A Divya :)
ReplyDeleteSorry to know that you had a bad day yesterday... Chill Hope you are better now.
Hey thanks dear... Glad u liked it..
@deVa: Thanks dude...
ReplyDeleteGreat tale Vijay..the flow is good. Sorry for delayed response as i was traveling. Best of luck
ReplyDelete@Engram: Hey thanks for the wishes and for liking the post... As far the delay is concerned its no biggi! Cheers :)
DeletePleasant journey and a positive end!!
ReplyDeleteNice read!! Kudos Vijay!
@ctkrishnan: Thank You! cheers!
DeleteVery interesting. They way you moved the story out of the train for a moment through the dream and smoothly brought it back...wonderful. All the very best for the contest.
ReplyDelete@Hariharan: Hey appreciate you checking out the post... Glad you found it interesting. Thanks!
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